NARRATIVE TEXT

Unsuspected Love

After the death of her parents eight years ago, Irenabelle Hana or she is famous with the named of Hana fills her days with making a net beside studied for her master degree.
only by crochet, she can forget about her grief.
"Hana".
Hana looked at her stepmother dressed in a beautiful red gown and her hair curled like a majesty. "Yes, Mom?" Hana live with her stepmother, means her parent's friend who willing to carry of her, not like a stepmother bad figure in a fairytail, Sevi really loves Hana, since Sevi's husband was dead and she couldn't give him a child. She took Hana as her daughter.
"Pretty, go down from car. The party starts in a few hours."
"Mom, i'm lazy to go to this party". seriously Hana, didn't she ever think what party it is, King's family party for her information.
"Oh my God, when my goddes Hana became so spoiled like this, come in".
She finally stepped in front of the Palace. She shocked for the thousand time, why her mom never told her about King's party. She put her eyes into the architecture of this palace, what an incredible creation, never changed. Even her mom is also rich but this palace is tottaly a mess fantastic. She forgot about the building. She looked at her mom happy face and the woman in front of her, The QUEEN.
"Please to meet you, Queen Marine. My name is Irenabelle Hana." she ended with smile and deep bow. Her mom, Sevi gave a proud sign to her politeness.
"Hana? you've grow so fast, you became more pretty, i'm Marine Damela, your mom and your parents old friends, also the mother of my sons, Prince Jhosevan Damazquez and Prince Dhaveba Damazquez."she pointed to the two handsome princes who sat in the corner of palace.
"Queen, please dont speak so formal to us". Sevi said, she felt so uncomfort.
"Sevi, you are my friend, so no problem". Queen said. its unbelievable to speak face to face to Queen again after 8 years, this is remind Hana about her parents.
"Be nice girl as usual, Hana. Your parents and i have been trying our head out being friends with Queen's family". she whispered to her lovely daughter and lil bit nerveous. Hana nodded and turn around her head, Mom was true, everyone look at them because of The Queen talk to her and Sevi.
"Do not worry, my guess stared at you and Hana because of your beauty." Queen smiled while Sevi and Hana blushed her cheek into red.
Hana can still remember the last time she and her parents was invited into a huge party eight years ago, before the incident. Hana was pretty sure Jhosevan Damazquez, the eldest child of King and Queen in Alamonde Kingdom will be chosen as the new CEO of Damazquez Corp. She already fallin in love with him.

'can i be your future girl or even wife?'

He is the reason why some girls outside shouted his name, because he is extremely handsome, he is a popular prince, has a great intellegence, and the CEO and King soon to be. What an astonish life if you can be the part of his breath.  But, what can she do, she is just 21 immature girl who getting struggle to get master degree early. But don't forget how almost perfect Hana itself.


A month left after the huge party of Inauguration The Dhamazquez Corp's new CEO be held. Hana is still thinking of him, Prince Jhosevan.
"what happened to you?" Her mom brought her a glass of strawberry, her favourite juice.
"Mom, don't you think its impossible if i want to be Prince Jhosevan's wife?" Suddenly Sevi shocked in the chair.
"erm.. of course not, he is a dream of every girl in this kingdom, you can get him by your beauty, good attitude, also your great IQ, you know nothing impossible, and impossible is nothing". Hana was burst into tears, she really loves her mother, Sevi always supported her in anything. She promised to make her happy, she wanted her Mom to get a husband, she tried a thousand time to forced her mom to get married but Sevi didnt want to.
"Your creation net is so cute".
"Mom, every girl in this kingdom also have a nice creation than mine"
"No, yours is the best"
Sevi thouched her daugter's soft hair. While they were making a net, suddenly the anchor of the news on TV give an announcement.
"Oh, My Girl in this kindom! Go into Alamonde Palace and follow the contest! There Prince Jhosevan looking for girl and will make you as her wife. Be ready for your future."
Hana feels like Earth didn't rotate anymore, she got a heart attack
"Mom"
"Dont ask me what to do. Just go and good luck, God always beside you." They both speechless, and no word can out from their lips.
Seeing Hana like this is Sevi's happiness, she smiled widely into her precious daughter.

The day of the contest began. In turn, there are 12 who dare to show their ability about making a net, they are all beautiful. Jhosevan Damasquez, the Prince was in the hail chair while look at the paper of contestant biography.
The prince felt he wasn't kid anymore. He is supposed to be a prince, but reality is he really a prince? he has all the girls want. He is almost perfect in the age of 29.

Out of the corner of his eyes, he could see a small pretty girl, long black haired, milky soft skin, driving her curved finger to make a beautiful creature. He heard before, if he is not mistaken, the girl is a stepdaughter from her mom's friend. He knows her background well. Hana suddenly stopped and looked careful as if she felt someone staring at him. She could see the prince looking at her with a deep stare. She tried to smiled beautifully and cheeky smile. Prince knew the smile was so pure.

'i caught you watching me, Prince'

After the contest ended, she back to home with Sevi, they must wait the result for two weeks from now. On the way to their house, suddenly Sevi and Hana's car was stopped by 3 girls."Oh my Lord, if i am not mistaken they are girls in the contest, Mom"
They stared at Sevi and Hana. "look...low class huh?" said one of them.


"Hana, you don't have to join this contest, you don't deserve a prince. Better you wash our clothes in the river." What the hell is this girl. Hana wanted to slap all of them, but.....
"i know Hana and I aren't like you who came from high class, but remember your behaviour just like an animal, even animal is better than you." Sevi shouted in front of their face. Hana hold her mom's hand and make she more calm.
"Shut up.....! Better you die." One of the girl replied, and while the blonde ones bring a sickle until.....
"NOOOO...PLEASE DON'T". Hana screamed loudly.
Blood.....
Tears.....
Blood everywhere.....
And all the memories turning back.
"Mom......" she whispered, down her knees into the ground.
"Mom......how dare you, open your eyes." The sounds of police cars are too busy come to the location and bring the three sick girls to the jail.
"Mom...your jokes aren't even funny". No respond. She smiled between her tears. She concuss her mom's body but no sounds. She hugged her mom, and feeling like The Earth is unfair.
"Mom....you are only one that i have" she opened her eyes widely when her Mom open her eyes little bit.
"i...i...will...hap..py...if...you.."
"NO MOM, DON'T SAY ANYTHING. WE ARE GOING TO HOSPITAL RIGHT NOW". She felt so upset when the ambulance hasn't come yet.
"POLICEMAN, WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR HA, PLEASE CARRY MY MOM"
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Two weeks later after incident..

"Mom, i'm so happy that you won't leave me alone"
she kiss her mom forehead.
"Honey, get a nice dress and go to the palace, King family are waiting for you"
"But mom...i won't let you alone in this hospital" said Hana with puppy eyes.
"I'll get mad if you won't go there, King family came here yesterday, don't make them dissapointed" Hana smiled and nodded.

Prince Jhosevan dressed up in a formal black suit with slacks. He smiled at way his dark hair was professionally styled back and walked down to see his parents. The king was dressed in almost same as him and his little brother, Prince Dhaveba.
Hana was dreesed in a navy dress that match her perfectly, his long hair was tied up make her so sexy and cute at the same time. The over pretty woman in this announcement party after the Queen. Prince watched Hana smile at the first time after what was happened to her stepmother.
"Dance with me hm?". cocking her head, Hana gave an innocent look as always. Dance with the prince? is she dreaming now?
"B.....but.." before Hana ends her sentences, Prince Jhosevan already put his hands on her waist. This sweetness made some guess espesially girls jealous. But the prince ignore their reaction toward him and Hana.
"i'm sorry Hana. Because the contest thingy, your mom being hospitalized now". Hana can't believe she let out the statement to the son of the richest King in her country, Prince Jhosevan.
"No, its not your mistake, Sir."
they both in a silence and feel the move of their dancing.
"May i ask something to you?" asked Hana formally.
"Don't be clumsy, just relax, ask whatever you want"said the prince. "what did you wish for tonight?" Hana's voice is so soft to be heard.
"i wish i could be a king. The king of this very grandear place. To be the First Man under my own kingdom" Hana hummed and nodded."you turn, say what did you wish for"
"But...sir"Hana tried to deny. "it's a command not a demand, Hana"
"what did you wish for?" the prince asked twice.
"To live my dream" replied Hana carefully. "what's your dream?" prince looked at her, he loves the way Hana's hair was blown by the air and don't foget about those pair of pure eyes. "i wish my mom and i could be happy together and for a thousand years, i want to get married one day with the right man that i love"
"you are too young to be a prince too,btw prince, who's the lucky girl that will be the winner in your contest?"
"ssst...i know whats on your head, stop dreaming" Hana shocked, she deserved this kind of thing, she thought that she was too confident before. Prince stopped her in the middle of their dance, he took a microphone. Its the sign of the announcement will begin.
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"Ladies and Gentleman, this is the time of year where i Prince Jhosevan Damazquez will announce your new Princess. I have made a wise desicion and chosed........"
Hana blanked, and some girls already envy toward her but they wished for her to be the lucky one.".......Miss Irenabelle Hana as the Kingdom's new princess. I will marry her after she graduated from collage and bring Hana and her mom, Sevi Lavenda to this palace". Everyone clapped as Prince Jhosevan walked into Hana's position with her unbelievable expression.
"You...said to me to stop dreaming" she started to cry. Everyone speechless. "Yes, stop dreaming because this is real. I.Want.To.Be.Your.Man" the prince stressed his sentences. "i want you to be my princess, to be the great mom of my descendant later" He stared at her and place her hand to his chest.
She hated the prince strategy to surprise her. He made she cried of happines.
"aaaa..i hate you, Prince"
"i love you too, my princess" Prince hug her carefully, Hana's heart is so fragile like a kid.
she is became a cinderella right now?
"my mom must be happy right now"
"sure, princess."
Crazy love. Hana and her mom will be the part of King family in this palace. it's an incredible. Hana's love is the meaning of the girl life.

SUMMARIZING PART II

Name: LITA SULISTIYANI

Summary Worksheet 3

THE LOST COLONISTS

1. The English were not the first Europeans to land their ships on American soil. The Vikings had discovered North America in the 11th century. Columbus landed in the Bahamas in 1492 for Spain, and the French began expeditions to the New World in 1524. But the first English presence in North America is important because the thirteen English colonies that would later be established eventually became the country now known as the United States of America.

Summary : The English were not the first Europeans to land their ships on American soil.

2. In April of 1585 Sir Walter Raleigh, under the authority of Queen Elizabeth of England, sent an expedition of seven ships carrying 600 men, half of them soldiers, to found an English colony in North America. The colony was to be used to establish an English presence in the New World as well as a base from which English privateers, or pirates, could attack and plunder Spanish treasure fleets. Raleigh’s cousin, Sir Richard Grenville, led the expedition.

Summary : Sir Walter Raleigh sent seven ships to found an English colony in North America.

3. In July of that year the bulk of the fleet reached a small island off the coast of Virginia that was called Roanoke. After building a small fort on the north side of the island, the colonists initiated relations with a Native American tribe that lived on the island, the Aquascogoc. These natives showed little interest in building relations with the English colonists, and they soon parted company. After this encounter, however, the English noticed that one of their silver cups had gone missing, and they attributed its disappearance to the Aquascogoc. Grenville, the English captain, was furious. He believed that the Aquascogoc had stolen the silver cup. Whether or not this was true, angry exchanges followed and soon the English burned the Aquascogoc village. The English held their fort against the subsequent attacks of the natives.

Summary : The English captain burned the Aquascogos because their silver cups had gone missing.

4. Despite their success in battle, the colonists had a miserable time because they were mainly soldiers and adventurers, not farmers. They were hungry. They missed the comforts of England, such as soft feather beds and dainty foods. Also they had expected to find gold and silver on the island, and were disappointed when they found none. Grenville soon tired of these conditions and set out on his ship to plunder Spanish treasure fleets and return to England. The colony was gradually abandoned. Summary : The Colonists can’t found their gold silver so they abandoned.

5. In 1587 Sir Walter Raleigh dispatched a further expedition of three ships and 150 colonists, led by John White, to Roanoke. This time the expedition included women and children, including White’s pregnant daughter, Elenora. Shortly after they reached Roanoke, Elenora delivered a child whom they named Virginia. Virginia was the first English person born in America. But the English soon ran into more trouble with the Native Americans. A colonist named George Howe was killed by natives while searching for crabs alone on the beach. The colonists were scared. They persuaded White to sail back to England to ask Sir Walter Raleigh for help. White left behind 114 colonists, including his daughter Elenora and granddaughter Virginia. Summary : The English soon ran into trouble with the Native Americans.

6. Unfortunately for White and the colonists, England was preparing for a naval war with Spain. All shipping from English ports was ceased. It took White three years to get his relief expedition back to Roanoke. When he returned in August of 1590, White found no sign of his daughter, granddaughter, or anyone else. They found three letters, “CRO,” carved on a tree and the full word, “CROATOAN,” on a nearby post. Possibly this referred to the Croatoan Island, which was nearby. White searched long and anxiously, but failed to find them.

Summary : White searched his daughter, granddaughter, or anyone else but failed to find them.

7. No further trace of the lost colony has ever been found. Sir Walter Raleigh himself searched for the colonists in 1595, and he sent another search-party in 1602, but nothing came of either attempt. To this day no one knows for certain what happened to the colonists.

Summary : This day, no one knows what happened to the colonists

WRITING EMAIL

Hello, bloggers. This time, i would like to share you about my experience mailing to foreign. Hehehe, i don't know why i'm so happy. :D
Yes, i realized that my english isn't good enough than u guys, but i hope u don't blame me cus of that:", there is nothing wrong to learn more and more. Am i right?:)

My friend is from London. His name is Louis Santiago. I knew him, because he is an admin from any group that i joined. He is 30 years old this year, i saw it from his profil in other socmed, he wrote "85 liners" there. He is so friendly and nice to me, to the others to :D. I did't expect too much about his email reply to me. But, yesterday he replied my email, even in the middle of his bussines. I knew he is busy person. So thanks to God and him about this. My assignment is going to be easy now, hihihi.


So here the short convo between me and Louis :D
(From left to right)

                              
This is my story from now, where is yours?:)))))

NOVEL REVIEW

Hellooooo  Bloggers little girl is back. This time, I would like to tell you about an interesting novel. Do you ever read novel before? Which genre that you like? Action, romance, comedy, thriller, school life, marriage life, horror, or crime? So, I finished to read this novel two months ago, there are so many novel that ive ever read, but this one is still stuck on my mind. Are you curious what the novel title is?

Before I continue, do you have wattpad? A social media that facilitate you to read anything there. Wattpad is good for us, you shouldn’t buy an expensive novel in a bookstore, all you need is download that app in playstore, sign up, sign in, then you can explore genre of novel as much as you want.

Hehehehe, why I’m too much talk. So the title is ‘”THE HEARTBROKEN HEARTBREAKER” have you ever read or heard this novel before?? guys you should read this one, and you’ll see how I am in love with this story.

‘”THE HEARTBROKEN HEARTBREAKER’’ written by SAM MADISON. The Heartbroken Heartbreaker is a beautiful book that touches my soul. The author is creative when it comes to the plot which is bordering cliche but at the same time it is not. There have been a few tissues utilized in the reading process of this book. And again, the author has excellent vocabulary, imagination and makes us fall in love with the characters. I absolutely loveeee this story, guys, you must read it.

So, THE HEARTBROKEN HEARTBREAKER tells us when Kyla Evans was dumped by her best friend-slash-boyfriend, Cedric, she was devastated. Convinced that her whole life came tumbling down, she promised that she would definitely get back at him, seeking nothing but revenge. She abandoned her glasses and sweatshirts, determined to make Cedric regret ever dumping her. What she wants: Revenge. How she’s planning to get it: By going out with the school’s biggest player; the person her ex-boyfriend loathes the most.

I found some good quotes form this novel, here it is. 

The Heartbroken Heartbreaker Quotes.

“Some people write to make something ugly beautiful, some write to leave a part of themselves to be remembered, some write to give words soul and meaning, and some write to exist in non-existence.”
― Sam Madison, The Heartbroken Heartbreaker

 “Moving on is not forgetting - moving on is being able to remember without feeling awful about it.”
― Sam Madison, The Heartbroken Heartbreaker

“When you get your heart broken, other people can help you pick the pieces up, but only you can glue the pieces back together.”
― Sam Madison, The Heartbroken Heartbreaker.

I give a rate 8 from 10, it has unusual endings guys, omygod you must you must and you must read it. Have I said must before? Hihihi.

Oke, this is one of my book review, so you turn guys, I’ll wait for your review story.

SUMMARIZING

Summarizing a Paragraph Practice

 A paragraph summary should be as short as possible, but it must be a complete sentence.

 The summary of a paragraph is the main idea of the paragraph. Often (but not always), the main idea is found in the topic sentence.

Step 1 Read the paragraph all the way through to be sure you understand it.

Step 2 Check to see if the paragraph contains a topic sentence.

Step 3 Write the topic sentence or statement of the main idea in your own words and sentence structure.

 If the paragraph has a topic sentence, does it state the main idea of the paragraph?

If so, you can use the topic sentence as the summary.

 If the topic sentence is not a good statement of the main idea, write a summary which states the main idea.

Example:

Shopping malls have produced a revolution in United States shopping and living habits in just 45 years. Before 1950, there were no malls, but now almost every city or region has at least one. In fact, shopping malls have become a part of daily life. Many people even think of them as social centers. In a way, malls have taken the place of Main Street. Shops and services, which were once spread over several city blocks, are now in one place at the mall. Busy householders can save time by doing their shopping at the mall. And people young and old, with time on their hands, often say, “Let’s go to the mall!”

Topic Sentence: Shopping malls have produced a revolution in United States shopping and living habits in just 45 years.

Summary: Shopping malls have changed United States culture.

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Summarize the following paragraphs. Follow the steps on page 1. Use as few words as possible.

The Challenger Disaster by Mary Jones

By 1984, NASA, the United States space program, had carried out many successful flights of the space shuttle. In fact, Americans were beginning to take the whole NASA program for granted. Then, the president announced that the next shuttle would carry a school teacher into space. Hundreds of teachers from all parts of the country applied for the job. They all wanted to be “the first teacher in space.” During the next year, these adventurous educators were tested and examined and trained. At last, the choice was announced. A teacher from New Hampshire, Christa MacAuliffe, would be the first teacher-astronaut.

Summary: President announced the next shuttle.

Many months of preparation and training followed the announcement. First, Christa went through intensive physical training. She had to be in top condition for the flight. Then she learned how to operate some of the delicate instruments on the Challenger space shuttle. Christa planned special lesions, which she would teach from space. Finally, she trained with the astronauts, so they could work as a team in space.

Summary: Christa has preparation and training.

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Everyone knows what happened on that terrible day in January, 1986. Early in the morning, the Challenger crew had a good breakfast and discussed their plans. They made sure they understood all of the work they would be doing during the flight. Later, they boarded a special

van, which carried them to the shuttle. The weather was rather cold, and some NASA officials wondered if they should put off the flight. After some discussion, they decided to go ahead. The Challenger took off over the Atlantic Ocean in Florida. Minutes later, it exploded in the air. All the crew members died in the crash.

Summary: The flight disaster in January, 1986 and all the crew members died.

MOVIE REVIEW

I would like to tell you about an Indonesian movie. I’ve never knew or update about an Indonesian movie before. But, my friend told me that she found a good movie. 

So, I recommend you this film and the title is “Java Heat”. The reason why I like this movie is the genre : action, crime, and drama. On the other hand, the main character is also made me scream loudly. Do you know Kellen Lutz whose play as Emmet Cullen in the TWILIGHT movie ? yeahhhh exactly he is the actor in Java Heat as Jake Wilde/travers. Then, other western actor is Mickey Rouke, has no doubt about his acting skill. Hihihi interesting right?

 Both actors collaborate with Indonesian actor/actress such as Ario Bayu, Verdi Sulaiman, Atiqah Hasiholan, Rio Dewanto, Mike Muliandro, Frans Tumbuan, Uli Auliani, and etc considered able to work with a very slick and display the best qualities in this film.

Java Heat directed by Conor Allyn from Screenplay Production, also the story written by Conor Allyn and Rob Allyn.

So, this story centers on the after math of suicide bombing in Indonesia, where a reckless American posing as a grad student is bent on vengeance but quickly finds that the world’s problems can’t be solved with violence alone. Then, a Muslim detective (Ario Bayu) teams with that American as grad student/FBI agent Jake Travers (Kellan Lutz) to find the man behind a series of deadly terrorist bombing in Indonesia especially a dangerous international jewel thief Malik (Mickey Rouke) who kidnaps a Sultan’s daughter Sultana ( Atiqah Hasiholan) in a plot to steal the royal treasury: exotic intrigue, amid ancient palaces, mosques, temples, labyrinths, and stone pyramids in the heart of java.

This movie released on 9 may 2013 as known as Golpe en Java. Guys, you should watch this incredible movie that indonesia’s ever had. Besides, the filming location is in indonesiaa especially in Yogyakarta States, so you can see the views or the culture of Yogyakarta it self. I give this  movie

8 stars from 1 -10.

(source : IMDb.htm)